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Comment from Stephen Allen Crow
Loved it, this is an awesome contest entry!
Best of luck to you!
Also, is it weird that I read the whole thing in some form of Irish dwarf accent? haha
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
Loved it, this is an awesome contest entry!
Best of luck to you!
Also, is it weird that I read the whole thing in some form of Irish dwarf accent? haha
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the Review, Reading and Rating this poem offering. LOL!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I've seen several other entries and this is sure different! Jaunty and jivin' cougar vs the mournful victim of his captivity. Probably not what the judges are expecting--let's hope they'll escape their cage and go for it!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
I've seen several other entries and this is sure different! Jaunty and jivin' cougar vs the mournful victim of his captivity. Probably not what the judges are expecting--let's hope they'll escape their cage and go for it!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you for Your Support, Reading, and Rating this poem offering. Blessings to you.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
My, my your words have snared me. I think you may be writing about me. If I had been born a cat I would have used my nine lives by the time I was nine. Approaching 81 I am still learning and often my prompts come from nature -- birds being tops. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
My, my your words have snared me. I think you may be writing about me. If I had been born a cat I would have used my nine lives by the time I was nine. Approaching 81 I am still learning and often my prompts come from nature -- birds being tops. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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We Should all be So Blessed to such a Great Life. Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering.
Blessings to you.
Comment from Pantygynt
For the the first time I begin to understand why the mountain lion, the cougar's name got purloined as a a soubriquet for the predatory elder woman, preying on younger male flesh. I still think it is a little hard on the beautiful animal, but hard is what she wanted so she can't complain.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
For the the first time I begin to understand why the mountain lion, the cougar's name got purloined as a a soubriquet for the predatory elder woman, preying on younger male flesh. I still think it is a little hard on the beautiful animal, but hard is what she wanted so she can't complain.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Yes, I agree, the beautiful Cougar gets a raw deal. Blessings to you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from Boogienights
Lol..this is very funny. It's nice to see a little humor for this challenge, as many have been quite serious. I think that may be a lioness, but who cares....your southern drawl was on point. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
Lol..this is very funny. It's nice to see a little humor for this challenge, as many have been quite serious. I think that may be a lioness, but who cares....your southern drawl was on point. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I prayed it wouldn't come off as offensive. Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.
Comment from Sueswrite
This has quite creative substance consumed within it's unique language, expressing a precise message in a very imaginative format. Very interesting writing. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
This has quite creative substance consumed within it's unique language, expressing a precise message in a very imaginative format. Very interesting writing. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering, Blessings to you.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I really like the way you use slang in a jive way to get across the attitude of the lioness. It's very clever and really works to engage the reader. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
I really like the way you use slang in a jive way to get across the attitude of the lioness. It's very clever and really works to engage the reader. Nicely done!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering. Blessings to you!