Passion
An Acrostic- Loop Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an exceptionally written loop/acrostic piece. The presentation shows well thought out placement of the artwork, with an excellent background with the red lettering adding a feeling of passion to this poem. I especially like how you begin and end with the word passion, that is the perfect title for this poem. Sensual and yet, as you say in your notes, one can be passionate about a cause or injustice or anything that moves the senses.
Jesse
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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This is an exceptionally written loop/acrostic piece. The presentation shows well thought out placement of the artwork, with an excellent background with the red lettering adding a feeling of passion to this poem. I especially like how you begin and end with the word passion, that is the perfect title for this poem. Sensual and yet, as you say in your notes, one can be passionate about a cause or injustice or anything that moves the senses.
Jesse
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, I very much like how you have understood what I was trying to say, very much appreciated****kahpot
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I loved the topic and the super way you presented your ideas. I am glad you appreciated my review.
Jesse
Comment from equestrik
This is a good and creative write. I lik that you wrote an acrostic and filled it with meaningful lines. This is a clever bit of writing and i enjoyed it. Best to you.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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This is a good and creative write. I lik that you wrote an acrostic and filled it with meaningful lines. This is a clever bit of writing and i enjoyed it. Best to you.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Boogienights
Wow! This is very sensual, and the fact that you combine two forms of poetry is awesome. This poem is chock full of emotions and it's an excellent contest entry. Thank you for sharing and best of luck. :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Wow! This is very sensual, and the fact that you combine two forms of poetry is awesome. This poem is chock full of emotions and it's an excellent contest entry. Thank you for sharing and best of luck. :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest.
Nice acrostic poem for passion.
I like the presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest.
Nice acrostic poem for passion.
I like the presentation too.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like the form of poetry that you used, the Acrostic loop. Your poem fits this format very well. Your picture is very interesting promoting the idea that with passion a variety of feelings come through. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I like the form of poetry that you used, the Acrostic loop. Your poem fits this format very well. Your picture is very interesting promoting the idea that with passion a variety of feelings come through. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Earl Corp
I like how you combined an acrostic poem with a loop poem. I agree with you, passion leads to desire and that's not always a good thing. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I like how you combined an acrostic poem with a loop poem. I agree with you, passion leads to desire and that's not always a good thing. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a clever loop acrostic that goes even further than required by the form in that the last word loops back to the first. I have always felt this should be a requirement for the loop is it doesn't loop if you don't. So very well done.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This is a clever loop acrostic that goes even further than required by the form in that the last word loops back to the first. I have always felt this should be a requirement for the loop is it doesn't loop if you don't. So very well done.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, and I agree to make the loop complete the first and last words should be the same
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Passion - Senses - Sensuality - Obey Natural Desire evolving in passion.
You choose the matter of the hearts to include as a topic for the emotion contest and you have done an amazing job moving gradually to the big one passion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with the writings.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Passion - Senses - Sensuality - Obey Natural Desire evolving in passion.
You choose the matter of the hearts to include as a topic for the emotion contest and you have done an amazing job moving gradually to the big one passion. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with the writings.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Goodadvicechan
What a wonderful "An Acrostic- Loop Poem". You deserve a lot of credit.
I like the title 'Passion" and it is well expressed in the poem.I l also like the closing line: "Natural desires now explode in passion.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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What a wonderful "An Acrostic- Loop Poem". You deserve a lot of credit.
I like the title 'Passion" and it is well expressed in the poem.I l also like the closing line: "Natural desires now explode in passion.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An acrostic and a loop all in one poem here which is quite a task to perform and I enjoyed the passion within these words, you even linked the first and last word too, a clever write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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An acrostic and a loop all in one poem here which is quite a task to perform and I enjoyed the passion within these words, you even linked the first and last word too, a clever write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
