Dandilion
A Spring Announcer3 total reviews
Comment from moonsunrise
This is such a delightful poem about the prelude to spring and the innocence of children. My cousins and I loved to make a wish and blow it away. The more dandelions we could find, the better.
Reading your poem brought wonderful childhood memories back to me.
Thanks very much for sharing.
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This is such a delightful poem about the prelude to spring and the innocence of children. My cousins and I loved to make a wish and blow it away. The more dandelions we could find, the better.
Reading your poem brought wonderful childhood memories back to me.
Thanks very much for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A poem about the changes in nature from winter to spring. It is interestingly worded and captures the reader to follow it closely.
Edit on last line:
for you [your] little face
No other edits or adjustments to suggestd.
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A poem about the changes in nature from winter to spring. It is interestingly worded and captures the reader to follow it closely.
Edit on last line:
for you [your] little face
No other edits or adjustments to suggestd.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is so sweet! And very well written. I don't know why people hate dandelions so much. The more the better, in my opinion, lol.
This should be an entry into one of the springtime contests coming up.
Happy writing!
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This is so sweet! And very well written. I don't know why people hate dandelions so much. The more the better, in my opinion, lol.
This should be an entry into one of the springtime contests coming up.
Happy writing!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
