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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "Babies and cats"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

8 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I think our next generation will not be so critical as they also have lived through this eposode. They realize that life is a gift from God. The babies that are born are a gift from God.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2021

Comment from Mastery
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Hi Iza. This very clever little chapter is amusing to say the least. Using animals instead of people is a refeashing mode with all that's going on.

I do suggest , for a more "reader friendly" post you shorten some of the paragraphs and use spacing between them. (just a suggestion though)

I liked these lines especially well:

" If everybody laughed at the beginning, then your team becomes annoyed with your cat's karate kid abilities.
So, yeah, Coronella changed our lives' order: happy cats, annoyed babies, and masked parents. What will become of our next generation?"

Bravo! Good job. Bob

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

Comment from estory
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You raised a couple of interesting points here in this little essay about the children born into this epidemic and how growing up with people around them wearing face masks with little physical contact might affect their soul as they grow up. Bet few people thought of that so far. It really made me wonder how these kids are going to be affected by all this. Guess we'll find out when they grow up. Also a strong contrast with the kittens. The fact that kittens are getting more attention and love than babies is really eerie. But that's this crazy, mixed up world we live in now. estory

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

Comment from lyenochka
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What a great observation! I like how you contrasted the difficulties of the overly sterilized babies and the overly spoiled pets (liked how the cats sabotaged the Zoom meetings!) during this time of Covid. I hope we get back to normal soon!

otherwise scot! (otherwise, scoot!)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    Thank you, and for sure I don't want to be one of those babies.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I had a granddaughter born on July 29th. My son was allowed in the room during delivery. He was restricted the amount of time he could remain in the room. When their first daughter was born, 2 years ago, he slept in the room with his wife and daughter. Even with COVID they take the girls to parks for long walked. Everybody just wears masks and they stay away from people.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    Congrats for the new bundle of joy:) in Canada is crazy:(
Comment from Wendy G
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Hi Iza, interesting reflections on the effects of Corona. But mums wouldn't be wearing their masks once at home and indoors hopefully? But this generation will doubtless accept mask wearing as just another aspect of health, and think nothing of it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, always interesting.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
    They do:( because they are afraid for their babies.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This is a piece of information about writing in progress of a chapter Babies and Cats in the book The Corona saga, not ready for review, wish to read the chapter as and when it will be posted. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
    Hi Tony:) it's ready now if you wish to have some laughs:) Thank you
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Heartbreaking--I'm astounded that nobody has written on the devastating, pervasive, insidious effects on babies born during the reign of Coronella. Stunning commentary.

hey shelved=>SHOVED that bundle of joy
We need the space for Coronei=>CORONELLA
masks figures=>MASKED-FIGURES
having their master's=>MASTERS home (plural vs possessive)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
    I am done writing it and is ready for review:) Thank you my friend. I run out of time:(