Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Exceptional

WOW you did it again. Only 6 words, but so. meaningful. You are genius level, and I mean that. Aside from that your poem is so today, although I am sure that through history the same problems were part of the landscape. Our species are quite prone to hatred and jealousy. Very sad.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review, it's very appreciated. You are a very nice person, thanks again. :)

Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Exceptional

WOW you did it again. Only 6 words, but so. meaningful. You are genius level, and I mean that. Aside from that your poem is so today, although I am sure that through history the same problems were part of the landscape. Our species are quite prone to hatred and jealousy. Very sad.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thanks so much. ❤

Comment from 4theloveoftrees

Excellent

Great poem for the contest, with the perfect message at an appropriate time. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and congratulations on your 1st place win!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thank you, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Congratulations on your win. In just 8 syllables you send a strong message that is much needed these days.
I like the addition of rhyme as well as the beautiful art work.
Nancy

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thank you for this nice review. I'd like to take credit for the rhyming, but it was a contest requirement. I'm glad you liked it, thanks again. :)

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

i am honestly not surprised you won but congrats!!!!! it is well deserved i have no suggestion and as always keep writing and stay safe oops meant to give you a 6 star review lol


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks Greyson, that's very nice of you to say. I really didn't think I'd even place, there were ao many great entries. Thanks again. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

I dont know how you manage to say so much in so far words! But here you are getting it done! Exceptionally written and love the picture you choose! Well done! Six stars

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. :)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! I like your poem. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good rhymes. Well done! I hope for peace too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thank you, I'm always glad to hear from you.:)

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Yes, here is a message that the world needs to hear. We need to join hands and be kind to one another. There is nothing good that can come of all this anger.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

You are right! Thank you for reading my poem. :)

Comment from RetroStarfish

Excellent

Great poem - and I really like the title. It adds to an already meaningful piece of art. This format is pretty unforgiving, but you've done a great job of creating a poem within the strict syllable count.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thank you for this nice review. :)