Bright
1-6-1 poem contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Ann Market
This poem reads very smoothly! This is the first 1-6-1 poem I have encountered that reads so well! The rhyming is perfect and aligns with the contest guidelines. The picture is also perfect! Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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This poem reads very smoothly! This is the first 1-6-1 poem I have encountered that reads so well! The rhyming is perfect and aligns with the contest guidelines. The picture is also perfect! Thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-You have a positive message,
too, for making it a good day.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-You have a positive message,
too, for making it a good day.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I hope I win.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, might this and and everyday bring us all bright wonderful sights that make us happy and feel blessed to be alive. I think that is one of the great hopes of most people. Life is hard, we need the little sights of wonder to keep us going.
A very good entry. I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Yes, might this and and everyday bring us all bright wonderful sights that make us happy and feel blessed to be alive. I think that is one of the great hopes of most people. Life is hard, we need the little sights of wonder to keep us going.
A very good entry. I wish you luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you! I hope I win.
