Sparkling Lights
Lights sparkling at night are very pretty10 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A bright and cheery poem. Compliant with the 1-6-1 syllable count. I like it very much. You got my vote. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments needed.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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A bright and cheery poem. Compliant with the 1-6-1 syllable count. I like it very much. You got my vote. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments needed.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Poetic Friend
In its brevity, this poem comes bearing stunning imagery. I saw those sparkling lights as you painted your words.
The poetic form was executed flawlessly. The rhymes works well, without sounding forced for the sake of the poetic form.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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In its brevity, this poem comes bearing stunning imagery. I saw those sparkling lights as you painted your words.
The poetic form was executed flawlessly. The rhymes works well, without sounding forced for the sake of the poetic form.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Sparkling Lights' is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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'Sparkling Lights' is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a wonderfully simpy piece that makes you think just how pretty lights are in the night. How they open up the darkness and allow us wander about the world filled with a certain type of beauty.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This is a wonderfully simpy piece that makes you think just how pretty lights are in the night. How they open up the darkness and allow us wander about the world filled with a certain type of beauty.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful photo to support or inspire your poem. It meets the requirements, and attributes living feelings of delight into lights, because they are fulfilling their purpose and role. Great poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Beautiful photo to support or inspire your poem. It meets the requirements, and attributes living feelings of delight into lights, because they are fulfilling their purpose and role. Great poem.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Comment from mermaids
I love Christmas lights and your picture is beautiful. You create a vivid scene with the 1-6-1 form. The image of lights at night is clear. I also admire your use of rhyming words which adds to the strength of your theme.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I love Christmas lights and your picture is beautiful. You create a vivid scene with the 1-6-1 form. The image of lights at night is clear. I also admire your use of rhyming words which adds to the strength of your theme.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Sparkling Lights, has the right set up and draws the readers' attention to the color and life that the bursting rays provide on the night sky.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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This 1-6-1, Sparkling Lights, has the right set up and draws the readers' attention to the color and life that the bursting rays provide on the night sky.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The lights are beautiful, Mystery Author. Your words are equally beautiful. I enjoyed your poem. Love the picture! Good job on the syllable count per line.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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The lights are beautiful, Mystery Author. Your words are equally beautiful. I enjoyed your poem. Love the picture! Good job on the syllable count per line.
Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Carol Clark2
Nice job on this 1-6-1 poem. I finally saw the stars last night after more than 2 weeks of cloudy skies here. Yes, it brought me delight, as you have said. This is a good contest entry. I wish you well.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Nice job on this 1-6-1 poem. I finally saw the stars last night after more than 2 weeks of cloudy skies here. Yes, it brought me delight, as you have said. This is a good contest entry. I wish you well.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Comment from Vanna1
You followed the criteria well. But I don't know what lights your talking about. Street lights, stars? Can you be more descriptive? It would add more to your piece. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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You followed the criteria well. But I don't know what lights your talking about. Street lights, stars? Can you be more descriptive? It would add more to your piece. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you 🙂
