Full Moon And A Little Bit More
a funny true story that happened earlier today3 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is definitely not humorous but an embarrassing situation. You are good in telling such a story.
Let's hope the boy was concentrating in driving and did not see much what's going on .
Hood writing skill.
Happy 2021.
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This is definitely not humorous but an embarrassing situation. You are good in telling such a story.
Let's hope the boy was concentrating in driving and did not see much what's going on .
Hood writing skill.
Happy 2021.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Jay Squires
the problem I've been having for the past couple days with loose panties and bottoms [I'm sorry, Miranda, but the way you explain it, you make it sound like it's common for panties to slip down. You never explain it, and that becomes troublesome because the entire story is built on the premise of defective panties. You need to take the time to explain their defect. Had you bought them at the 99 cent store?
me and my husband-to-be distinctly heard the truck slip gears ["... my husband-to-be and I distinctly heard the truck slip gears."]
he instantly broke out into peals of laughter. [This is unclear whether it was your fiance or the one in the truck who was laughing. You make it clear soon, but meanwhile it has interrupted the movie your words are casting on the screen of the reader's mind.]
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the problem I've been having for the past couple days with loose panties and bottoms [I'm sorry, Miranda, but the way you explain it, you make it sound like it's common for panties to slip down. You never explain it, and that becomes troublesome because the entire story is built on the premise of defective panties. You need to take the time to explain their defect. Had you bought them at the 99 cent store?
me and my husband-to-be distinctly heard the truck slip gears ["... my husband-to-be and I distinctly heard the truck slip gears."]
he instantly broke out into peals of laughter. [This is unclear whether it was your fiance or the one in the truck who was laughing. You make it clear soon, but meanwhile it has interrupted the movie your words are casting on the screen of the reader's mind.]
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a situation. I guess if it wasn't a full moon, then no one would have seen your bare behind. Yes. The truck driver laughed all the way home. But at lest your finance didn't.
Well done.
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What a situation. I guess if it wasn't a full moon, then no one would have seen your bare behind. Yes. The truck driver laughed all the way home. But at lest your finance didn't.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
