No Place Like Home
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Linda
your 5-7-5 poem No Place Like Home
is beautiful. and what an amazing picture Linda I wish the best in this contest
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Hello Linda
your 5-7-5 poem No Place Like Home
is beautiful. and what an amazing picture Linda I wish the best in this contest
Gert
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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OMG Gert, Thank You so very much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and all your shinning stars...thank you for the best wishes...and going back and reading my poem...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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You are welcome Linda
Gert
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. I like what it says. I am a Christian believer too, and I love its reassuring message. I was looking for something else, and was drawn to the sweet picture of Heaven on your page.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem. I like what it says. I am a Christian believer too, and I love its reassuring message. I was looking for something else, and was drawn to the sweet picture of Heaven on your page.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Hi Mary Kay, Thank you so very much for a great review...I love the picture...
God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
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You're very welcome, Linda. God bless you too! Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely way to portray the greatest gift ever given!! ;) Beaautifully done, Lady Linda -- thanx so very much for giving us that perspective! ;) Enjoy your travels...! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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What a lovely way to portray the greatest gift ever given!! ;) Beaautifully done, Lady Linda -- thanx so very much for giving us that perspective! ;) Enjoy your travels...! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2021
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Hi Yvette, Thank You sweet girl for a wonderful review...
and you are soooooo welcome...smiling big back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Hopeful2
You found a perfect image for the meaningful thoughts and feelings you've shared while fulfilling the 5-7-5 structure. You pulled off a clever comparison of our eternal life to a mortgage held by God. Thanks for sharing your faith-filled insights into the meaning of all of this.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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You found a perfect image for the meaningful thoughts and feelings you've shared while fulfilling the 5-7-5 structure. You pulled off a clever comparison of our eternal life to a mortgage held by God. Thanks for sharing your faith-filled insights into the meaning of all of this.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Hi Hopeful, Thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Eternal Muse
I really loved it. "Eternal mortgage" put a smile on my face - anybody who has a mortgage would react to those words (smile). A phenomenal picture of heaven (is this what heaven looks like?).
A very, very creative poem. I am very impressed.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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I really loved it. "Eternal mortgage" put a smile on my face - anybody who has a mortgage would react to those words (smile). A phenomenal picture of heaven (is this what heaven looks like?).
A very, very creative poem. I am very impressed.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Hi Yelena, LOL...I said it will be the only mortgage I will ever had paid off...but I'm close on the one I am in...LOL...
Thank you sweet girl for a awesome review...and for all your shinning stars...I'm so glad I could put a smile on your face...
I truly often wonder what Heaven does look like...do we just all walk on clouds???...are we in thought the way we are now???...sigh...thank you my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from karenina
Original and ironic way to combine the earthly with the eternal. You cannot be criticized for leaving the meaning vague...kudos to sum the value of faith up beautifully in 17 syllables! I predict you'll do well in the contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Original and ironic way to combine the earthly with the eternal. You cannot be criticized for leaving the meaning vague...kudos to sum the value of faith up beautifully in 17 syllables! I predict you'll do well in the contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
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Hi, Karenina, how are you doing???...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...God Bless...and stay safe...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mark D. R.
So glad it was paid it off for good behavior to their fellow man. St. Peter may make exceptions for paupers. Good idea expressed for this contest entry. You chose a good illustration.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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So glad it was paid it off for good behavior to their fellow man. St. Peter may make exceptions for paupers. Good idea expressed for this contest entry. You chose a good illustration.
Mark
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Mark, Thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda...xxoo
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello L.RAVEN,
This a powerful and true 5/7/5 poem about "No place like home." You are right, God holds my mortgage in Heaven. It's paid in full, when I enter the eternal place I will not have anything else to pay. Beautifully written. I love the imagery used to reflect your message. Thanks. Happy future writing.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hello L.RAVEN,
This a powerful and true 5/7/5 poem about "No place like home." You are right, God holds my mortgage in Heaven. It's paid in full, when I enter the eternal place I will not have anything else to pay. Beautifully written. I love the imagery used to reflect your message. Thanks. Happy future writing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Joyce, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
it will be the only mortgage I have that was ever paid off...LOL...but I'm not far away now...thank you...and your so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ronni
Wow dear, what a profound and preciously inspiring, consolation to
mind, spirit, heart and soul revival and revelry this is in such compelling
5-7-5 Poem! I love it, and you for sharing it so dramatically, wisely, and compassionately! You are always such a delightful and inspiring spiritual light and messenger of our Lord and all His Blessings we often need but overlook and soothing
reminder of, and especially at most draining times as our lives and
worlds have been! Thank you for sharing dear friend! I would
like to Bookshelf this one dear, its too precious not to!
Hope you are staying safe and well...and have a beautifully rewarding
and blessed New Year with you and yours!!!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Wow dear, what a profound and preciously inspiring, consolation to
mind, spirit, heart and soul revival and revelry this is in such compelling
5-7-5 Poem! I love it, and you for sharing it so dramatically, wisely, and compassionately! You are always such a delightful and inspiring spiritual light and messenger of our Lord and all His Blessings we often need but overlook and soothing
reminder of, and especially at most draining times as our lives and
worlds have been! Thank you for sharing dear friend! I would
like to Bookshelf this one dear, its too precious not to!
Hope you are staying safe and well...and have a beautifully rewarding
and blessed New Year with you and yours!!!
Love, blessings always, Ronni
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Ronni, so good to see you sweet lady...WOW!!!! Thank You Ronni
for an amazing review my sweet friend...and your lovely stars...
I would be honored to have you bookshelf it...
I just told someone...it will be the only mortgage I have ever had paid in full...LOL...but I am close with the one I own now...what a wonderful review Ronni...smiling sooooo big my sweet friend...thank you for all your kind words...I hope you are staying safe as well...
and you and your family had a Blessed New Year and a Merry Christmas...God Bless and much love to you...Linda xxoo
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Thanks dear, am doing fine
and thanks for the warm Holiday wishes! Your loving spirit beams and glows all
through your writes, and
so admired and appreciated
each time. A virtual spirit tonic LOL...
Love always Ronni
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much love sweet lady...xxoo
Comment from amada
This is a great inciting poem. Great and gracious lines about having a great paid hoe in Heaven. These lines are enticing, worth to wait for. Your poem shines in light. Thanks.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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This is a great inciting poem. Great and gracious lines about having a great paid hoe in Heaven. These lines are enticing, worth to wait for. Your poem shines in light. Thanks.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Hi Amada, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...God Bless...and you are so welcome...love you...Linda xxoo
