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Discarded Treasures

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Deep in Georgia sits a house with unusual treasure

33 total reviews 
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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This chapter is very enticing and kept my interest all the way through. The writing is good. I'm glad she pulled herself out of the water by using a branch. I'm eager to find out more why she ended up in Georgia.

Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for the review. It actually posted before I was finished editing, so I'm still working feverishly on it. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This fiction is expressive and entertaining to read-learn the benefits achievable through practice of positive attitude and positivism in courses of living, confidently and rationally; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your review!
    Rhonda
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. Although I have missed the earlier ones, this reads like a stand-alone story. I like the narrative. The atmospherics very well described. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year!

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your review. For some reason, the post went to published before I had a chance to finish editing it, so I didn't have much information in the notes.