Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Very well done! You used the words very effectively and the integration of the required words into the poem was smooth and seamless. I really like the artwork you chose - it goes so well with your subject and reminds me of my backpacking days in the Colorado Rockies.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Susan, thank you!

Comment from RetroStarfish

Excellent

Wonderful poem. Really well done - great narrative arc, lyrical and engaging rhymes, and you've hit all the necessary words.
"...I cast off my repose in hazy dreams..."
Really well done.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent work getting all the required words into your poem. Lovely picture and presentation to compliment your piece.
Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Janet, thank you.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

Is it just me or do you see a face in those mountains, too? Weird!

This entry for the contest seems to include all the right verbiage and it reads well. Thanks!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Private respite's so sweet
Mountain repose

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the
Write a poem using these words... writing prompt contest. You did a good job incorporating the words.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Mr. Green

Good

You got all of the word requirements in for this contest, and I thought your poem was very good. However, there was a point where my attention got lost, and that break in the flow, contributed to a disconnect. As an example, you write "While away the day away from the hype." It might read better if you took out one of the words, "away.'

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thanks

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

You met the challenge very well by using those words like you did and putting them in bold type made it easy to see. I love how you used a triple rhyme in each verse. Very nice.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you..

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a creative presentation. I love the picture with it's majestic mountains and beautiful meadow. Your writing does a good job incorporating the required words.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

This poem took me on a walk through mountain flowers, sitting next to nature and contemplating the year ahead. That is some thing only beautiful writing can do, and this is absolutely beautiful

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Nice use of the assigned words. You should do well in the booth. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021

Thanks Earl.