Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Football Chapter 8 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A knock on the door is always polite. The teachers must be getting their class schedule in sequence. It sounds like the teachers are getting together for class meetings except Mr. Frost. Where is he?
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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A knock on the door is always polite. The teachers must be getting their class schedule in sequence. It sounds like the teachers are getting together for class meetings except Mr. Frost. Where is he?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
This is another good chapter. It popped up in my message section
so I decided to go ahead and review it. It gives me a better
perspective on where you're going with this.
Thanks for sharing. Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Barbara:
This is another good chapter. It popped up in my message section
so I decided to go ahead and review it. It gives me a better
perspective on where you're going with this.
Thanks for sharing. Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
the clicking sound continues..and the dogs are qquick to pick them up. I hope Katherine won't be harmed .The coach is a real gentleman.athe story is progressing smoothly with able handling of the language....
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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the clicking sound continues..and the dogs are qquick to pick them up. I hope Katherine won't be harmed .The coach is a real gentleman.athe story is progressing smoothly with able handling of the language....
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Barb, but
it is beyond me what to do with it:)
-A good story that centers around it.
-You describe the typical first day
of teaching meetings and schedules
very well. I taught H.S. English and
took an early retirement in 2001.
-I'm glad Katherine didn't have 5
different subjects; that would have
been tough.
-The mood is pleasant, and everyone
seems relaxed.
-But there is still the mystery of what
the issue is that the dogs keep hearing
on the morning walk; I keep thinking
something is going to happen
once Gabe leaves!
-Well done; have a great New Year!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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-Good artwork, Barb, but
it is beyond me what to do with it:)
-A good story that centers around it.
-You describe the typical first day
of teaching meetings and schedules
very well. I taught H.S. English and
took an early retirement in 2001.
-I'm glad Katherine didn't have 5
different subjects; that would have
been tough.
-The mood is pleasant, and everyone
seems relaxed.
-But there is still the mystery of what
the issue is that the dogs keep hearing
on the morning walk; I keep thinking
something is going to happen
once Gabe leaves!
-Well done; have a great New Year!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review. I retire in June. YEAH!!!!
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You are very welcome, Barbara. Congratulations to you on the upcoming retirement. I haven't forgotten my reaction when I finally did after 29 years. How many will you have?
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14 here in Texas, but 26 total. I stayed home when my boys were little.
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That is a good career, about the same as mine.
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the gentle way the romance is taking place. Though Katherine may still be denying it, she is kind of getting hooked on Gabe little-by-little. He certainly seems eager to please her and protect her too. With the unknown threat lurking in the shadows, that could be a good thing.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I like the gentle way the romance is taking place. Though Katherine may still be denying it, she is kind of getting hooked on Gabe little-by-little. He certainly seems eager to please her and protect her too. With the unknown threat lurking in the shadows, that could be a good thing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I agree. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
Ooh... I knew it! He's growing on her! Aww, it's so sweet to see these two in action; when they're talking or laughing. That last part: Chuckling he realized his error. "Of course you. I'd never forget you." He avoided eye contact... My heart swelled at that moment! HA! I can't wait to see what else these two do! And, the mysterious 'click' they heard... it's stumped me. It's not Frost, so who is it? And I noticed a few errors:
(")The Social Studies department has a lot of students signed up this year. I'm not sure why the increase, but we have a staff member, who can cover that. Coach Hudson, would you prefer to teach US History, or Government?"
He put (this) hand on the small of her back. (I think I told you about this error, but I saw it again, so... :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter! Super excited!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Ooh... I knew it! He's growing on her! Aww, it's so sweet to see these two in action; when they're talking or laughing. That last part: Chuckling he realized his error. "Of course you. I'd never forget you." He avoided eye contact... My heart swelled at that moment! HA! I can't wait to see what else these two do! And, the mysterious 'click' they heard... it's stumped me. It's not Frost, so who is it? And I noticed a few errors:
(")The Social Studies department has a lot of students signed up this year. I'm not sure why the increase, but we have a staff member, who can cover that. Coach Hudson, would you prefer to teach US History, or Government?"
He put (this) hand on the small of her back. (I think I told you about this error, but I saw it again, so... :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter! Super excited!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I know I fixed on this. I couldn't find this one. I read the post twice. I'll read it again. Found it in last weeks post. Thank you for the catches.
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You're welcome!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. The plot continues to move along. The school days are bringing back great memories, and makes me feel younger! ha ha
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story. The plot continues to move along. The school days are bringing back great memories, and makes me feel younger! ha ha
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
Another very well written (FS) chapter. it is nice and even paced. I was wondering why after Katherine's alarm sounded, Gabe just made sure she entered the house. You know, what about the inside. It didn't seem to matter.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Another very well written (FS) chapter. it is nice and even paced. I was wondering why after Katherine's alarm sounded, Gabe just made sure she entered the house. You know, what about the inside. It didn't seem to matter.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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I am pretty sure she didn't go down the basement. LOL Although we rarely have basements in Texas. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RetroStarfish
You have a nice way of ending each chapter leaving the reader wanting more. This entry is more subtle, but it's there.
I enjoyed this chapter - the plot moved forward and the characters became more established.
It has nothing to do with the plot, but I got a little chuckle over a math teacher miscounting how many classes she had to teach.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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You have a nice way of ending each chapter leaving the reader wanting more. This entry is more subtle, but it's there.
I enjoyed this chapter - the plot moved forward and the characters became more established.
It has nothing to do with the plot, but I got a little chuckle over a math teacher miscounting how many classes she had to teach.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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On her original schedule there were 5 classes. They'd changed her schedule. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear barbara, I really appreciate it this informational post as you call it, and I didn't mind the length of this chapter because I can see that several things needed to be set in place. ( For example the house across the street that the dogs keep growing at ) for the next chapters to make sense.
As always, your writing is excellent!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Dear barbara, I really appreciate it this informational post as you call it, and I didn't mind the length of this chapter because I can see that several things needed to be set in place. ( For example the house across the street that the dogs keep growing at ) for the next chapters to make sense.
As always, your writing is excellent!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
