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President Biden

a senryu

17 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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It's quite hard to tell if you approve of him or not Bill. But I love it, it's a great picture of him, not capturing him in the most flattering way. Great entry, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Roy. He comes with the positive aspect of not being Donald Trump.
reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2020
    Ah hah
Comment from L. Kalere
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Very, very interesting and amusing take on our politicians. These are sad times, indeed. Where are the noble and brave and wise? There is much said and implied in so few words. Very nicely done.
Best of luck in the contest...
Linda

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thanks, LK
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Hopefully, unlike Bush, President Biden knows that the best way to read a book is with the book right side up. He may know how to read better than the last two Republican Presidents.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    At least he is a. regular politician who lies, not a habitual liar who is a politician.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 14-Dec-2020
    so true
Comment from equestrik
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This is a good write for the political senryu contest. I enjoyed the picture as it definitely added some humor. I am surely glad he has read a bok. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks, equestrik
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
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Where did you get that picture? What's the big deal about reading?! Why did they invent comic books? Who needs geography, history, logic or integrity? LOL! Good poem!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks, Jerry.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

Great entry for the
Political Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Biden is a good decent man with the experience to lead the country, all qualities Trump lacks. Can't wait to get rid of him.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks, GBR
Comment from LisaMay
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... in fact he has probably read several books, and even knows how to hold them up the right way. I hope he is sticking his tongue out at all the nay-sayers who insist he will be a weak president.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    We're leaving the "hobo with a shotgun' logic of being president and returning to the layered diplomatic, glad-handing that keeps everyone's pants on. The fun comes when Trump and his cohorts sell all they know to Russia, Saudi Arabia, and China.
reply by LisaMay on 13-Dec-2020
    The pants might be on but the shirts on our backs are up for disposal apparently... and someone's diaper definitely needs changing.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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Well, this was really hilarious. I am the same opinion of the man, but right or wrong, he got to top this time. I hope and pray, for all our sakes, that he does a good job and does what he promises. Your picture is just too funny.

Good luck in the contest; this should do well.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks EM
reply by Eternal Muse on 13-Dec-2020
    I originally created the Political senryu prompt, years ago, and am surprised they are still running this.
Comment from mauial
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I like the inference of genius and reading a book about the other guy in your poem. That hit my funny bone as I thought about the "genius" who said maybe people can be injected with disinfectant.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    One's no genius and the other is no prize.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written political Senryu about a man who is more like a clown with no morals or the guts to stand up against the enemy who want to steal the country under his nose.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Sandra