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Message In A Bottle

To all kids --- from Santa (in the Bahamas)

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Comment from sammielwf
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Now this cute contest entry is barking up the right tree or sleigh as it were.
This little verse made me chuckle and after so much strain and stress this year...Good ole Rudy needs to recharge his red nose in the BAHAMAS.....wearing his mask of course.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your kind review...glad you could smile. We all need it this year, especially.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet ..

you have your first vote!

Besides the very cute pic , I loved your punchline :

Bitch knows all the routes .

PS : most poems are about Santa wearing a mask but if I'm not mistaken .. your government (USA) has not made masks obligatory for Santas.




 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Don't get me started on my government :)
    Thank you for reading my work and for your vote.
    Much appreciated!
    Blessings of the holiday season to you and yours.
reply by tempeste on 13-Dec-2020
    Oopppsss

    ... sorry for the typo Butch not Bitch . ( biggrin)

    Christmas Greeting to you and family ( bells ringing)

    Keep safe !
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Actually, I quite like bitch--it's funny... but perhaps not from Santa :)
Comment from padumachitta
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hello
a cute poem for this prompt. Did you see the picture and then write the poem or vise versa...either way they fit together good.

What a year, let's hope next year is brand new...

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    I wrote the poem first but jumped when I saw the picture. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wendy Gordon
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Oh no! Don't tell me that Santa is not coming this year! This will be the worst thing in a terrible year! How can he justify taking a vacation in the Bahamas? He wouldn't even have a suitable wardrobe! And Butch is not as good as Rudolph! A lovely poem but I am so disappointed! Best wishes for the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your cute response. Blessings toy you and yours this holiday season!