To Just Pause
watch snowflakes dance, just be present38 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
This is a very well written poem, meeting the requirements, and it brings a sense of quiet peace. Certainly it is finding joy in the quiet beautiful aspects of nature and savouring them. Best wishes for the contest.
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This is a very well written poem, meeting the requirements, and it brings a sense of quiet peace. Certainly it is finding joy in the quiet beautiful aspects of nature and savouring them. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Wendy, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Vanna1
Sometimes we do need to just stop a see the beauty in the world. Good presentation. You have a nice peaceful piece. A good time to present it as snow has just begun. Soon we will be annoyed of dirty slush.
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Sometimes we do need to just stop a see the beauty in the world. Good presentation. You have a nice peaceful piece. A good time to present it as snow has just begun. Soon we will be annoyed of dirty slush.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
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Vanna, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love watching the snow fall, it is calming and gives us a cosy feeling, it slows time and gives us a chance to recharge our batteries, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I love watching the snow fall, it is calming and gives us a cosy feeling, it slows time and gives us a chance to recharge our batteries, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
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Dolly, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Ann Market
This was a fun poem! You stayed true to the guidelines and created beautiful imagery as well. I enjoyed imagining snowflakes in the short, but specific way you described them.
Good luck to you in the contest!
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This was a fun poem! You stayed true to the guidelines and created beautiful imagery as well. I enjoyed imagining snowflakes in the short, but specific way you described them.
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
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Ann, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'To Just Pause', is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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'To Just Pause', is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Duchess, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
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Dear Anon,
You're very welcome.
God bless, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
watch snowflakes dance, just be present
To Just Pause
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 3-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the theme of being present.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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watch snowflakes dance, just be present
To Just Pause
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 3-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the theme of being present.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Gypsy, thank you!
Comment from DonandVicki
I never thought of snowflakes falling of being in the present moment, but you are right. When I watch snow fall, it is very relaxing and peaceful. A lot of meaning in so few words.
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I never thought of snowflakes falling of being in the present moment, but you are right. When I watch snow fall, it is very relaxing and peaceful. A lot of meaning in so few words.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Therese Caron
It's amazing how you can get beautiful words into such a short amount of syllables allowed. I never thought of snowflakes as dancing, but that is exactly what they do. The image you chose is lovely also. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest.
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It's amazing how you can get beautiful words into such a short amount of syllables allowed. I never thought of snowflakes as dancing, but that is exactly what they do. The image you chose is lovely also. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
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Therese, I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from mermaids
Watching snowflakes is a beautiful past time that I have participated in. The use of the word 'dance" adds a feel of fantasy to the beautiful snowflakes coming down. Excellent use of words.
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Watching snowflakes is a beautiful past time that I have participated in. The use of the word 'dance" adds a feel of fantasy to the beautiful snowflakes coming down. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
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Mermaids, I smile back and I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
poem to go with it.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and
imagery.
-Effective personification
of the snowflakes.
-Good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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-Nice artwork and
poem to go with it.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and
imagery.
-Effective personification
of the snowflakes.
-Good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Pam. I smile back in appreciation and I do thank you for your time taken to read and comment on this poem.
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You are quite welcome😊
