Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

The cats are a good metaphor. The words fit well. It may be silly but it is so often true that we see the fat cats with cravats just sitting and watching others do. Is that what you mean?

Ralf

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020

Thanks, Ralf. I think subconsciously, yeah, I was making a metaphor. :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Did you draw this? I'm beginning to think you are gifted in so many different areas from sailing to writing and cooking. I especially liked that you chose all words with short 'a' sounds. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020

I did. I coudn't find a picture in FanArt that I wanted to use. So I just drew one. There are so many talented artists on FanArt though! Thanks for the review, lyenochka.

reply by lyenochka on 27-Nov-2020

You're so talented! Next thing you'll be writing a graphic novels. I vote for the two clad cats for your first characters!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A very cute poem for the contest; I loved your creative imagery, visuals and wit. Adorable artwork to accompany.

I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020

Thank you, Eternal Muse.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

Oh, this is silly but also cute. Your little illustration pairs perfectly, of course, and sets the stage for your words. I will bet you are a double talent and drew it yourself.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020

Hah! I did. Writing and drawing are both relaxing. Thanks for the review.

reply by roof35 on 26-Nov-2020

Always wished I could draw. My granddaughter has talent and I am so pleased for her.