My Brother 2
A poem I wrote for my brother.7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a great and encouraging poem for your brother - and all brothers and sisters in Christ! I like your choice of picture that fits your final lines so well. My favorite line was:
"Liberated from the triteness of this world revived by the power of his eternal salvation."
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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What a great and encouraging poem for your brother - and all brothers and sisters in Christ! I like your choice of picture that fits your final lines so well. My favorite line was:
"Liberated from the triteness of this world revived by the power of his eternal salvation."
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
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Thank you .
Comment from robyn corum
Justin,
This is a great piece that will honor your brother. I am sure he will be pleased you care so much to write an encouraging poem about his salvation and your love for him. Bless you!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Justin,
This is a great piece that will honor your brother. I am sure he will be pleased you care so much to write an encouraging poem about his salvation and your love for him. Bless you!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you Robyn.
Comment from roof35
You appear to be young. I wonder if you are headed for a life as a "Man of the Cloth?" You certainly have a spiritual way of expressing things. This is nicely said for your brother and others.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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You appear to be young. I wonder if you are headed for a life as a "Man of the Cloth?" You certainly have a spiritual way of expressing things. This is nicely said for your brother and others.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartfelt plea well-conveyed in rhyme. Putrid pits of self-pity--priceless!--wit and alliteration!--earns your stars in itself. Thanks for footnotes to put this in context.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Heartfelt plea well-conveyed in rhyme. Putrid pits of self-pity--priceless!--wit and alliteration!--earns your stars in itself. Thanks for footnotes to put this in context.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you Elizabeth
Comment from Satiety McCollum
Nice write. It's so hard to convince someone that you know what they need to "fix" them, but for some reason just won't do it. I think change scares people, too. But, we never stop offering, do we? Good work.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Nice write. It's so hard to convince someone that you know what they need to "fix" them, but for some reason just won't do it. I think change scares people, too. But, we never stop offering, do we? Good work.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your profoundly Christian poem is vividly descriptive and moving--
conveying a powerful message about THE Way, the Source of salvation, peace, and guidance.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Your profoundly Christian poem is vividly descriptive and moving--
conveying a powerful message about THE Way, the Source of salvation, peace, and guidance.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you Janice.
Comment from GE Parson
Justin, I give you the highest rating possible because you glorified the Lord in uplifting your Brother's spirit. Not only your Brother but I'm
sure many others, if they follow your counsel.
I don't recall meeting you before, so with a firm FS hand shake, "Howdy!"
Your Brother in the faith of our Lord Jesus Christ,
Jerry
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Justin, I give you the highest rating possible because you glorified the Lord in uplifting your Brother's spirit. Not only your Brother but I'm
sure many others, if they follow your counsel.
I don't recall meeting you before, so with a firm FS hand shake, "Howdy!"
Your Brother in the faith of our Lord Jesus Christ,
Jerry
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much Jerry.
