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My God will comfort me

God is omnipresent and compassionate

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Comment from lyenochka
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Such a great message, Justin! Thanks for sharing about the comforting presence of our amazing, all-powerful and comforting God! I like your use of a refrain of "My God will comfort me."

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Great thought and well written. Where would we all be without the comfort we receive from the Lord Jesus. He is always there for us no matter what circumstances we face.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Thank you very much Anne.
Comment from Tonsy Bennett
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Amen, God is our great comforter and healer! I see that sermon really did inspire you, in a way that with some music it could be a beautiful song. Its awesome for you to write and share your experience and divine encounter with our heavenly father. People will appreciate reading that Justin. Thank You.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Thank you Tony.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A faithful and hopeful write of support, and feelings of comfort in the knowledge of being cared for by God and your belief is strong and powerful here, much enjoyed Justin, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Effective repetition of My God will comfort me with its delightful twist at end brilliantly changes the tone (from what some would construe as self-absorption ME ME ME) to embrace other.

(He will take you in his mighty arms and [fill you] with jubilation.)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you Elizabeth.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is an excellent, deeply spiritual piece. I especially like the way you organized it. The first part is like the type of responsive readings done in church. You have movingly told what the Lord does for you and have assured, rightly so, that He will do the same for others!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you Janice.
Comment from robyn corum
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Justin,

HAha I guess your lesson was similar to the one we had yesterday - remaining hopeful in the face of storms. We have so many examples of folks in the Bible who could have wilted - and stayed down, but they found strength in God and His promises and rose to fight again. *smile*

Thanks, buddy~

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you Robyn.
Comment from George Santhosh
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Thank you for sharing this :) You have a lot of faith. May God bless you.

Here are a few suggestions. Please have a look and edit:
* For the 4 lines starting with 'When', use a Comma to finish the line :)
* Bow down and let you be at ease -> Bow down and be at ease (Optional, I understand you were going for a specific language style)
* Comma after Savior (Since the next line is a continuation)
* take you in His Mighty arms and filled with jubilation -> Remove "and"
* As He sees you begin to live once -> Remove 'begin to'

Hope this helps,
George

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you George.