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The Teacher

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Teacher - 10"
Hostage situation at an elementary school.

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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The font doesn't show, you will need to use advanced editor and adjust the font from there:) otherwise the story is fluid and we add new elements to this mass-abduction. We learn more about the teacher and her abilities to keep the kids engaged and quiet.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you very much.
Comment from robyn corum
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T,

Nope. The story was not in a different font - which probably would have helped quite a bit in comprehension and following this section of the story. It still read fine but required a little more effort to be entirely understood, if that makes sense.

Thanks - this was well-written and enjoyable.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thanks. I'm not sure how to change font styles on FS. I'll keep tinkering.
reply by robyn corum on 16-Nov-2020
    You have to be posting in Advanced Editor. You'll see that option under the text box when you go into to 'edit' mode.

    If you click there, you'll be able to see lots of extra options. In prose, there aren't QUITE as many, but you'll see the little boxes - toward the top right corner to change the font and colors, etc.

    To do that, highlight the passages you want to change -- position your mouse at the beginning of the first word and click and drag to the end of the portion you want. It should become highlighted - colored differently. Then go to the font and color options - font color is represented by the 'A' .

    Good luck. If you have questions or need help - holler!