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The Teacher

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Hostage situation at an elementary school.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is another strong chapter. You do a great job of building up suspense. This chapter had me biting my nails from the start to end. As usual the writing is excellent with strong use of dialogue.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from blondie560
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really enjoyed the last two chapters. It was sad to learn of Andi's family's deaths. I feel terrible for her having guilt over not stopping her brother. How terrifying she must have felt in that closet. Looking forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you very much. I appreciate these six stars.