Contented
20 syllables39 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize for this thoughtful poem--wise message elegantly conveyed--alliteration--soothe/soul. Missed the release; glad I caught up. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Congrats on your prize for this thoughtful poem--wise message elegantly conveyed--alliteration--soothe/soul. Missed the release; glad I caught up. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Hello Liz... thank you very much for the lovely review. I am delighted you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from l.raven
Hi Melissa, such true words sweet girl...
there is a contentment in being grateful
for what we have...for being happy in life..
knowing our worth...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and so
love the picture...very nicely written you...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Hi Melissa, such true words sweet girl...
there is a contentment in being grateful
for what we have...for being happy in life..
knowing our worth...
I love your poem my sweet friend...and so
love the picture...very nicely written you...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, sweet Linda, for your kind words and review. Hugs!!
Melissa
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always so welcome Melissa...much love and lots of hugs back at you...xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
Here's to peace and contentment --being grateful soothes the soul. I was transported by your serene picture selection. Best wishes in the 20 Syllable Poem contest. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Here's to peace and contentment --being grateful soothes the soul. I was transported by your serene picture selection. Best wishes in the 20 Syllable Poem contest. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Hi Joan. Thank you so much!!
Melissa
Comment from L. Kalere
Very beautifully stated, and something to always remember. Your artwork selection is gorgeous and compliments the simplicity and elegance of your words.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Very beautifully stated, and something to always remember. Your artwork selection is gorgeous and compliments the simplicity and elegance of your words.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Sigh.... yep, that's the reaction your gentle and wise offering here has on your reader, Melissa - beautifully formatted and sagely stated! ;) I would say that if more folks had this on their walls as a reminder, there'd be a lot fewer stressed people out there! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Sigh.... yep, that's the reaction your gentle and wise offering here has on your reader, Melissa - beautifully formatted and sagely stated! ;) I would say that if more folks had this on their walls as a reminder, there'd be a lot fewer stressed people out there! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Yvette!! I find that just stopping to be grateful changes my entire point of view. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from Cindy Decker
Melissa, I agree with this sentiment wholeheartedly. Wanted things that are out of reach causes one bitterness and discontent.
And, I alway think if a person loses all they have, at the time, they'd be grateful just to get it back.
Lovely poem,
Melissa.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Melissa, I agree with this sentiment wholeheartedly. Wanted things that are out of reach causes one bitterness and discontent.
And, I alway think if a person loses all they have, at the time, they'd be grateful just to get it back.
Lovely poem,
Melissa.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Hi Cindy. Thank you so very much! I really appreciate your comments.
Melissa
Comment from Paul Borders
This made me read it three times. The more I read it, the more I liked it. And agree with it. Contentment in life is such a wonderful achievement. Well done Sugarray77.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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This made me read it three times. The more I read it, the more I liked it. And agree with it. Contentment in life is such a wonderful achievement. Well done Sugarray77.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Hello Paul... thank you for such an encouraging review! Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from CD Richards
Absolutely excellent advice, Melissa. People who think they'll find happiness through a multitude of material possessions rarely do. It seems our nature is to want more, the more we have. That also goes for non-material things, too. We are better off setting our sights low as far as desires go, then we are less likely to be disappointed.
Love the simple directness of your words, and the feeling is enhanced by the excellent choice of image.
Great job, best of luck in the contest.
Craig
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Absolutely excellent advice, Melissa. People who think they'll find happiness through a multitude of material possessions rarely do. It seems our nature is to want more, the more we have. That also goes for non-material things, too. We are better off setting our sights low as far as desires go, then we are less likely to be disappointed.
Love the simple directness of your words, and the feeling is enhanced by the excellent choice of image.
Great job, best of luck in the contest.
Craig
Comment Written 10-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Wow, Craig, you have so made my day!! I heartily agree with your sentiments about people putting too much value on material things... so glad you like it.
Melissa
Comment from rama devi
Absolutely true, and so well voiced, my friend. This is a supreme spiritual teaching, and I like the combination of soft C in peace and alliteration and consonance of S having a fine counterpoint, musically, with the consonance of T. Bravo.
LOVE the presentation.l Tasteful and impacting.
Serene.
Strong entry. Good luck!
Hugs,
rd
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Absolutely true, and so well voiced, my friend. This is a supreme spiritual teaching, and I like the combination of soft C in peace and alliteration and consonance of S having a fine counterpoint, musically, with the consonance of T. Bravo.
LOVE the presentation.l Tasteful and impacting.
Serene.
Strong entry. Good luck!
Hugs,
rd
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hello, Sweet Rama... it is so good to see your happy face pop up tonight. I am so delighted that you thought this one was meaningful and had a gentle message inside it. :). Hugs!!
Melissa
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Hugs to you, Sweet Melissa! Nice to see you too! :-))
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautiful, but truthful statement. It is the small things in life, the laughter, the love that we share with our family that truly matters. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful, but truthful statement. It is the small things in life, the laughter, the love that we share with our family that truly matters. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hi Misty... thanks. I am delighted that you like it!!
Melissa
