Little Sister's Ode To Me
This is how she described growing up to me.19 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
what a beautiful poem, and a great tribute to your big sister! your poem was so thrilling to read, as I am the youngest of three girls and i related to your poem very much. I do not have children, but my sisters do, and I have a sweet relationship with my nieces. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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what a beautiful poem, and a great tribute to your big sister! your poem was so thrilling to read, as I am the youngest of three girls and i related to your poem very much. I do not have children, but my sisters do, and I have a sweet relationship with my nieces. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and very happy that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming tribute--delightful punchline
cousins (hypehate) hand-me-downs s/b cousin's or cousins' depending if one or more, high school is two words
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Charming tribute--delightful punchline
cousins (hypehate) hand-me-downs s/b cousin's or cousins' depending if one or more, high school is two words
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from royowen
How fortunate to have a big sister that even took the place of your mum, I really loved this, it touched my soul deeply so that Drew great emotion from me. Beautifully written in articulate, smooth, rhyming couplets, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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How fortunate to have a big sister that even took the place of your mum, I really loved this, it touched my soul deeply so that Drew great emotion from me. Beautifully written in articulate, smooth, rhyming couplets, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
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You too
Comment from lyenochka
Aww! What an adorable pair of girls! Love that picture! You were the model big sister! I especially liked this couplet which made me smile:
"You tried to ditch the frowns and keep a smile upon your face,
And it was up to you to find the toys I would misplace."
Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Aww! What an adorable pair of girls! Love that picture! You were the model big sister! I especially liked this couplet which made me smile:
"You tried to ditch the frowns and keep a smile upon your face,
And it was up to you to find the toys I would misplace."
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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I found her toys in the most unusual places. Not just under the bed. She always had to have her blanket and was losing that too...lol Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a really fun and charming ode to a sister. It is wonderful when we know for sure there is someone in our corner.
The only time I raised a brow was on the formal gowns and dresses-- how could any of sister*s dresses be new when all she wore was second-hand clothes to start?
Cute. Thank you!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a really fun and charming ode to a sister. It is wonderful when we know for sure there is someone in our corner.
The only time I raised a brow was on the formal gowns and dresses-- how could any of sister*s dresses be new when all she wore was second-hand clothes to start?
Cute. Thank you!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Ahhh. She Looked new, not was new. I altered them so she looked like the dress was new but was a hand me down I had worn from my cousin. I didn't think to alter them for me...lol Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Such a cute sister poem and I love it. I love the rhyming and the couplets structure. Now I wish I have had a sister like this. My sister, who is 10 years younger, is nothing like this. You are so lucky and she deserves this Ode poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Such a cute sister poem and I love it. I love the rhyming and the couplets structure. Now I wish I have had a sister like this. My sister, who is 10 years younger, is nothing like this. You are so lucky and she deserves this Ode poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and she did turn out so beautifully. A great wife and mother. I am very proud of her.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such fond memories of your sister here and her warm personality gave her own children a good life, what a wonderful gift to pass on, a fine story poem here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Such fond memories of your sister here and her warm personality gave her own children a good life, what a wonderful gift to pass on, a fine story poem here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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It was a task but well worth it when my sis turned out so beautifully. Wonderful mother and wife. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Well written poem in tribute to your older sister.
Your love and appreciation of her comes through in your well written words.
Well done in the rhyming.
good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Well written poem in tribute to your older sister.
Your love and appreciation of her comes through in your well written words.
Well done in the rhyming.
good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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It was a task but well worth it when my sis turned out so beautifully. Wonderful mother and wife. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-This is a very good poem
that shows how much
your sister meant to you.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-It sounds like even at a young
age, she was a very giving person.
-You show your love and
appreciation in the poem,
and particularly in the closing couplet.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-This is a very good poem
that shows how much
your sister meant to you.
-Very good imagery and rhyme.
-It sounds like even at a young
age, she was a very giving person.
-You show your love and
appreciation in the poem,
and particularly in the closing couplet.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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It was a task but well worth it when my sis turned out so beautifully. Wonderful mother and wife. Thanks so much for reviewing.
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You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to an older sister who usually takes the role of caring with the smaller kids when mothers are busy with other things and it is great to hear the younger siblings recognize their sacrifice.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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A very well-written ode to an older sister who usually takes the role of caring with the smaller kids when mothers are busy with other things and it is great to hear the younger siblings recognize their sacrifice.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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It was a task but well worth it when my sis turned out so beautifully. Wonderful mother and wife. Thanks so much for reviewing.
