Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You have used an excellent allusion. This will cause the reader to scramble for more background. This will draw the reader in. The tone is set by using this literary technique. There also is a strong juxtaposition of the way the reader perceives the setting until that last line. Clever.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks for such an encouraging review zanya

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is an incredibly lovely entry for the 'Haiku' contest. That moon is brilliant. Your writing is well matched to the photo. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya

Comment from roof35

Excellent

I think danse macabre means dance of death so this is a bit eerie. However, you followed the rules and penned it right. Your illustration pairs perfectly.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks for a great reveiw zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and
presentation.
-You have written a good
haiku that meets all o f
the requirements.
-Good syllable count, plus
nature and seasonal imagery.
-You create a vivid word picture
of the scene and have a very
good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Oct-2020

You are very welcome, zanya.