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Dog Chases Deers

Dog has fun chasing deers.

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Dog Chases Deers, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, finds teh playful dog pacing the deer and presenting himself as a passable predator.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Teri7
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Wow! I love this picture of the little black dog chasing the beautiful deer. You used very good words that told us what was going on in the picture. Very nice haiku you have penned for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thanks! I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!