The Las Vegas Angel
Disguised contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Allow me the honor of being reviewer #15--this earns you another virtual blue (recognized) ribbon--anticlimactic of course to your well-deserved winner ribbon--for which congrats--I know this piece is no longer listed--I searched your portfolio to find a story I hadn't reviewed so that I could give you the six I intended to award your stellar Unicorn tale--but so used to auto-five place-holder before even reading--and system won't allow upgrade to six.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Allow me the honor of being reviewer #15--this earns you another virtual blue (recognized) ribbon--anticlimactic of course to your well-deserved winner ribbon--for which congrats--I know this piece is no longer listed--I searched your portfolio to find a story I hadn't reviewed so that I could give you the six I intended to award your stellar Unicorn tale--but so used to auto-five place-holder before even reading--and system won't allow upgrade to six.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the giant sixer and for getting my ribbon for me, Elizabeth. Plus, the big six offer on the unicorn piece. I always love throwing unexpected endings in my stories. Many times, they're just a silly joke that I'll base the whole story around just to use it at the end. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece, E. Thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction and a perfect disguise for the serial killer. I thought the killer could be the lady investigator, never thought but could be the male, everyone is looking for a lady.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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A very well-written flash fiction and a perfect disguise for the serial killer. I thought the killer could be the lady investigator, never thought but could be the male, everyone is looking for a lady.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sandra. Yeah, I made his partner a female so everyone would think it was her. lol I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this piece.
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Ron
Comment from Brad Bennett
Well mystery writer, I was going to suggest you could be the protagonist in my Vegas story, but I see your killer's a man. Looks like we are both Photo Shop artists, I created my pix from about 5 different pix also. It gives us an edge for sure. Good luck, may the best killer, marriage cheater win.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Well mystery writer, I was going to suggest you could be the protagonist in my Vegas story, but I see your killer's a man. Looks like we are both Photo Shop artists, I created my pix from about 5 different pix also. It gives us an edge for sure. Good luck, may the best killer, marriage cheater win.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Brad. I'm glad to see that someone else here takes the time to get the exact picture they want. Your picture came out great. I use a free art program called GIMP. It has all the bells and whistles I need. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece and I'll catch you on the next go-round. Have a good one.
Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, a story with a twist at the end and I just love these kind of tantalising tales. Much enjoyed and this drag queen is very dangerous! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Ha ha ha, a story with a twist at the end and I just love these kind of tantalising tales. Much enjoyed and this drag queen is very dangerous! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. Yeah, he's not a very nice 'she'. lol I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have a great day.
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Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I liked this a lot. You kept the reader in suspense through the whole account. It wasn't until the speaker was looking in the mirror that it hit me that there was something going on. This was a fun ending.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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I liked this a lot. You kept the reader in suspense through the whole account. It wasn't until the speaker was looking in the mirror that it hit me that there was something going on. This was a fun ending.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Liz. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL I liked the story but I admit the ending was a surprise! I had already thought I had it figured out halfway through the story. I thought that the lady partner would be the one that would turn out to be the killer! It being the male detective was a shocker! Very well done! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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LOL I liked the story but I admit the ending was a surprise! I had already thought I had it figured out halfway through the story. I thought that the lady partner would be the one that would turn out to be the killer! It being the male detective was a shocker! Very well done! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Patty. Yeah, I made his partner a female so it wouldn't give the ending away. lol I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry with a surprise ending for the Disguised writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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This is a great entry with a surprise ending for the Disguised writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Rebecca. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the Disguised writing prompt contest. It's perfect for Halloween season. You did an exceptional job with the good place, intriguing plot, and terrific ending. Female serial killers are rare... But turns out it's a man. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Excellent entry for the Disguised writing prompt contest. It's perfect for Halloween season. You did an exceptional job with the good place, intriguing plot, and terrific ending. Female serial killers are rare... But turns out it's a man. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Hey, Gypsy, hello. Thank you so much for the excellent review and giant sixer. I had a lot of fun writing this. I had to put some kind of twist on the end. lol I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this dark little piece. I hope you have a great day and thank you again.
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Ron
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You're welcome :) you have a wonderful day too
Comment from Mary Vigasin
i did not expect the ending after all the details given about the murder and the other killings. I thought the twist would be his partner!
Good job in this story.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the contest.
mary
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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i did not expect the ending after all the details given about the murder and the other killings. I thought the twist would be his partner!
Good job in this story.
I enjoyed the read.
Best of luck in the contest.
mary
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Mary. Yeah, I made the partner a female so it would throw the reader off. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little story.
Ron
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, that was a surprise ending! He was her! I doubt the she'll ever be caught then. This was a really good story, and you came up with a great disguise for the contest. Well done, and good luck! :)) Sandra
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Well, that was a surprise ending! He was her! I doubt the she'll ever be caught then. This was a really good story, and you came up with a great disguise for the contest. Well done, and good luck! :)) Sandra
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sandra. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Hope you have a wonderful day.
Ron
