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Comment from judiverse
A very timely poem. You did a great job with the loop words. Now is the time for all voters to have their say. There is a lot at stake. This a great power that citizens have. This year there's a choice of voting by mail, early in-person voting, or voting on election day, so no excuses! I think we can tell a difference in this presidential election. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A very timely poem. You did a great job with the loop words. Now is the time for all voters to have their say. There is a lot at stake. This a great power that citizens have. This year there's a choice of voting by mail, early in-person voting, or voting on election day, so no excuses! I think we can tell a difference in this presidential election. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the Rating, Review and Continued Support.
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You're very welcome. I've already voted! judi
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. You're right that by voting is our strong voice making a difference. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. You're right that by voting is our strong voice making a difference. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the Rating, Review and Support.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your loop poem about the election is a 'per stanza' loop rather than one continuous loop from beginning to end... know this is a style of loop and the contest does not designate one way or another... :) I would suggest, however, that the over-use of capitalization for words that are proper nouns is distracting. Not sure the multiple explanation points in combination with them is necessary...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Your loop poem about the election is a 'per stanza' loop rather than one continuous loop from beginning to end... know this is a style of loop and the contest does not designate one way or another... :) I would suggest, however, that the over-use of capitalization for words that are proper nouns is distracting. Not sure the multiple explanation points in combination with them is necessary...? Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem offering.
