Spring Breeze
Disguised / Story2 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hello mystery writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks for an encouraging reveiw zanya
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Well done--masterful narration. I've read this three times--I don't know if I got the ending--my best guess: she expected to meet Harold then before she noticed Harold Arthur stepped out and she thought he was Harold at first because last time Harold had not been wearing the wig, so his hair was golden like Arthur's? Let me know! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Well done--masterful narration. I've read this three times--I don't know if I got the ending--my best guess: she expected to meet Harold then before she noticed Harold Arthur stepped out and she thought he was Harold at first because last time Harold had not been wearing the wig, so his hair was golden like Arthur's? Let me know! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Loved this review ! Writing about disguises can be something of a challenge !! zanya
