A Puny Yarn
If you do not like puns, don't read this16 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Okay, somebody (namely one, Jerry Goldberg) had some real fun with this one, didn't he?! ;) Oh, my goodness - you outdid yourself with puntime playing, didn't you?!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and good luck (if I didn't already miss the contest)! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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LOL!! Okay, somebody (namely one, Jerry Goldberg) had some real fun with this one, didn't he?! ;) Oh, my goodness - you outdid yourself with puntime playing, didn't you?!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, sir, and good luck (if I didn't already miss the contest)! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Yvette - Thanks for the 5 star review. You are right on, this was fun to write. Hope that reading it wasn't too pun-ishing. LOL - Jerry
Comment from Barbaraj1
I am a lover of puns. I have had very short ones published in the Chicago
Sun-Times. I enjoyed your puny story. Puns aren't always easy to write.
Good job.
Barb
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I am a lover of puns. I have had very short ones published in the Chicago
Sun-Times. I enjoyed your puny story. Puns aren't always easy to write.
Good job.
Barb
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Barb - thanks for the great review. Hope that reading it wasn't too pun-ishing. LOL - Jerry
Comment from Bill Schott
This punny story, A Puny Yarn, is so loaded with puns that it has them coming out its hoo hoo. I least I think that it's puns..
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This punny story, A Puny Yarn, is so loaded with puns that it has them coming out its hoo hoo. I least I think that it's puns..
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Bill - thanks for the great review. Hope that reading it wasn't too pun-ishing. LOL - Jerry
Comment from Minglement
Oh my gosh, this is hilarious. When I saw this contest, I couldn't imagine how it could be done - but you did it with flair and such laugh out loud humor. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Oh my gosh, this is hilarious. When I saw this contest, I couldn't imagine how it could be done - but you did it with flair and such laugh out loud humor. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Hi - Thank you for the excellent review. I do hope that reading it was not too pun-ishing. LOL - Stay well - Jerry
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is absolutely terrible.
But as a bad pun piece it is absolutely wonderful.
I enjoyed the read.and the puns.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This is absolutely terrible.
But as a bad pun piece it is absolutely wonderful.
I enjoyed the read.and the puns.
Good luck in the contest
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Mary - thank you for the excellent review. I almost had heart failure when I read your first sentence; but, I quickly recovered. Very clever approach to a review. I hope that reading this story was not to much pun-ishment. LOL - Jerry
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Interesting entry for the Bad Puns writing prompt contest.
The story of Tartan the Tailor and Miss Lacy is a tragic love affair gone wrong and has a few puns..
Good luck in the contest.
pi eating ability.(silly, you can't eat math)
free dresses with no strings
But being a bit backward, when it came to writing, he wrote inverse.
She was truly in Seine.
Good job
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hello, my friend,
Interesting entry for the Bad Puns writing prompt contest.
The story of Tartan the Tailor and Miss Lacy is a tragic love affair gone wrong and has a few puns..
Good luck in the contest.
pi eating ability.(silly, you can't eat math)
free dresses with no strings
But being a bit backward, when it came to writing, he wrote inverse.
She was truly in Seine.
Good job
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanks for reading my story, I hope it was not too pun-ishing. LOL. Actually there were six puns built into the story. Stay well - Jerry
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I see it now, I don't know how I missed it. Sorry about that. I rewrote the review and the rating to five stars.
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Welcome back and thank you for the extra star - stay well - Jerry
Comment from sammielwf
Oh my oh my Jerome,
This bad pun filled yuck/grimace fest was actually quite fun to read. I read this twice over to make sure that I did not miss any of the witty humor. This style definitely "suited" you dear writer. Maybe you have a chance to sew this contest up with a win.
Good luck.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Oh my oh my Jerome,
This bad pun filled yuck/grimace fest was actually quite fun to read. I read this twice over to make sure that I did not miss any of the witty humor. This style definitely "suited" you dear writer. Maybe you have a chance to sew this contest up with a win.
Good luck.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review. I hope that it was not to pun-ishing to read. LOL. Stay safe - Stay well -Jerry
Comment from Earl Corp
You were able to put together quite a collection of puns in a short amout of space. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy .
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You were able to put together quite a collection of puns in a short amout of space. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy .
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Earl - Thank you for the excellent review. I hope that it was not to pun-ishing to read. LOL. Stay safe - Stay well -Jerry
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about bad puns to make up a story that are wild and hard to believe that it could be true. The lovers relationship don't end well at all.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A very well-written flash fiction about bad puns to make up a story that are wild and hard to believe that it could be true. The lovers relationship don't end well at all.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Sandra - Thank you for the excellent review. I hope that reading it was not too pun-ishing - Jerry
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jerome. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. It was very punny. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hello Jerome. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. It was very punny. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review. I hope that reading it was not too pun-ishing - Jerry
