Delicate
a thanka17 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a rhyming poetry contest entry. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and is very relevant right now. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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This should have been a rhyming poetry contest entry. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and is very relevant right now. Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from BethShelby
Far be it from me to fault you for seeing through your toes. It's a little unusual but fine with me as long as anything goes. I choose to see it through my eyes and it is lovely. Have a nice day.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Far be it from me to fault you for seeing through your toes. It's a little unusual but fine with me as long as anything goes. I choose to see it through my eyes and it is lovely. Have a nice day.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Beth
Comment from judiverse
The lovely rose brings on a feeling of encouragement to look for the beauty of life instead of finding fault. You seem to say bring on the daily problems. I'm looking for the good. Well stated. Appropriated called a Thanka. judi
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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The lovely rose brings on a feeling of encouragement to look for the beauty of life instead of finding fault. You seem to say bring on the daily problems. I'm looking for the good. Well stated. Appropriated called a Thanka. judi
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely tanka (thanka!) And you're so right that we can be uplifted by the beauty of life and focus on things that make us grateful, instead of "finding fault."
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A lovely tanka (thanka!) And you're so right that we can be uplifted by the beauty of life and focus on things that make us grateful, instead of "finding fault."
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, you must be feeling sentimental to write such a beautiful and tender poem as this.
I suspect it was the illustration of that beautiful pink white rose that inspired this poem.
It is truly wonderful that things so lovely can survive.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Dear Bill, you must be feeling sentimental to write such a beautiful and tender poem as this.
I suspect it was the illustration of that beautiful pink white rose that inspired this poem.
It is truly wonderful that things so lovely can survive.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I agree. Thank you, Suzanna
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill Schott
Oh I had to laugh at the way you tell us how you see your toes
I believe you have a great an unusual comparing your toes to the beautiful white roses
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hello Bill Schott
Oh I had to laugh at the way you tell us how you see your toes
I believe you have a great an unusual comparing your toes to the beautiful white roses
Gert
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Gert
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You are welcome Bill Schott
Gert
Comment from Sugarray77
A cleverly written verse Bill. I adore the photography and wish I knew the name of the rose. Your Tanka is concise and perfectly crafted! Good job. I would mention that in your subtitle, the word Tanka is misspelled. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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A cleverly written verse Bill. I adore the photography and wish I knew the name of the rose. Your Tanka is concise and perfectly crafted! Good job. I would mention that in your subtitle, the word Tanka is misspelled. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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It is a Thanka, Melissa. Tankas have rules.
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Hahaha.... so fun!!
M
Comment from Ulla
Hehehehehe, you do take the mickey, don't you? And you're so good at it. I loved this Thanka, and whatever follow in its wake. Very well done.Yo have such a great talent. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hehehehehe, you do take the mickey, don't you? And you're so good at it. I loved this Thanka, and whatever follow in its wake. Very well done.Yo have such a great talent. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Ulla, for the kind review, Bill
Comment from juliaSjames
Hahaha
First lowku and now thanka. I love your parody, Bill. I'll be watching where I place my feet, on the lookout for hidden treasure.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Hahaha
First lowku and now thanka. I love your parody, Bill. I'll be watching where I place my feet, on the lookout for hidden treasure.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Julia
Comment from RGstar
I like where this went. The logic, the message and the delivery. The image projects and suit the imagery . Well done Bill, good to read from you.
Have a great day.
RG
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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I like where this went. The logic, the message and the delivery. The image projects and suit the imagery . Well done Bill, good to read from you.
Have a great day.
RG
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you, RG
