Obsessive Tendencies
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Confirmation...Of So Many Things"An Unlikely Journey Toward Reconstruction
17 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh, things are getting hot. Gregor has confided in his friend and now they have to figure out what to do. Things are going to get even more complicated.
Excellent writing! I can feel the tension building. This romance isn't going to be a simple one in any way. It could unite or divide and will probably do both.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Oh, things are getting hot. Gregor has confided in his friend and now they have to figure out what to do. Things are going to get even more complicated.
Excellent writing! I can feel the tension building. This romance isn't going to be a simple one in any way. It could unite or divide and will probably do both.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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What's a good fantasy without some animal attraction and family angst, yeah? ;) :) :) Thanx so much for your enthusiasm for this one, my lady -- really means more than you know!! ;) Those stars are just the boost I needed over here, so you are awesome!! ;) :) Take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Debbie Pope
You must be doing well, Yvette. You have caught us up on two stories lately.
In your fantasy world, you have such a love story going here. With true love, I guess you can't keep eyes from glowing. You say your fantasy world is being merged into our human world. I suppose you are speaking of human emotions and loyalty. Love conquers all kind of theme.
It's an interesting story. I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You must be doing well, Yvette. You have caught us up on two stories lately.
In your fantasy world, you have such a love story going here. With true love, I guess you can't keep eyes from glowing. You say your fantasy world is being merged into our human world. I suppose you are speaking of human emotions and loyalty. Love conquers all kind of theme.
It's an interesting story. I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Let's just say I am trying to find some sense of me (normalcy is out the window - LOL!!)... But I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, Debbie -- always love to hear what you have to say about my fantasy stuff (wink, wink!) I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... ;) Take care down there, BBF, and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvette, I read this chapter with great interest and I found the interaction between Gregor and Andre very interesting. I love the story and I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hi Yvette, I read this chapter with great interest and I found the interaction between Gregor and Andre very interesting. I love the story and I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for dropping by for this one, Ulla -- always so good to hear from you over here, my lady! ;) I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... so, I appreciate your input! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I like the intensity of the two best friends in their conversation, especially the shift change to make the emotional change clear. Seems like Andre got to a dangerous point with his buddy at that point but then relaxed to the usual male banter.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Well, I like the intensity of the two best friends in their conversation, especially the shift change to make the emotional change clear. Seems like Andre got to a dangerous point with his buddy at that point but then relaxed to the usual male banter.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Helen! :) I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... so, yes, I appreciate your input! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
An argument between two werewolves over a "woodland fairy" is beyond my realm of thinking. I'm wondering when the jealousy and alpha posing begins to surface. That should be an interesting confrontation.
Z
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Hello Yvette.
An argument between two werewolves over a "woodland fairy" is beyond my realm of thinking. I'm wondering when the jealousy and alpha posing begins to surface. That should be an interesting confrontation.
Z
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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LOL!! Thanx so much for checking in on these two, Z -- so appreciated your support, sir, with all of my crazy fantasies! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Hey Yevette.
You're welcome. Fantasy is too complex for my simple mind. HAHAHA
Z
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully clever banter with a hefty side of snark--sly innuendo: not a condition he wished to be sporting. Cheers. LIZ (bear his neck s/b bare; curiosity was peaked s/b piqued)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Delightfully clever banter with a hefty side of snark--sly innuendo: not a condition he wished to be sporting. Cheers. LIZ (bear his neck s/b bare; curiosity was peaked s/b piqued)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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LOL! Have always loved the strong friendships between guys, ya know? Just not deterred by girly moods and, though rough sometimes, they're just there for each other no matter what... :) ;) I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader, at least) the true bond the two share... so, I appreciate your input! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I really loved the interactive nature of Gregor and Andre, but they seem to have a relationship that goes beyond the norm. I enjoyed the conversation, particularly when Celeste was introduced into the conversation, it would be interesting if it went beyond control,. Excellent episode Yvette, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I really loved the interactive nature of Gregor and Andre, but they seem to have a relationship that goes beyond the norm. I enjoyed the conversation, particularly when Celeste was introduced into the conversation, it would be interesting if it went beyond control,. Excellent episode Yvette, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much, Roy -- I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... so, I do so appreciate your input! ;) Take care down over there, sir, and have a rest of the week! ;) Yvette
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Well done
Comment from aryr
You did a great job with this continuation chapter, Yvette. It was a great dialogue between Gregor and Andre during which Andre became more and more confused about Celeste but at least he caught on. I guess the even bigger question is what Max, Gregor's father do?
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You did a great job with this continuation chapter, Yvette. It was a great dialogue between Gregor and Andre during which Andre became more and more confused about Celeste but at least he caught on. I guess the even bigger question is what Max, Gregor's father do?
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Yeah, Daddy ainta gonna be happy... :/ :/ Thanx so much, Alie -- I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... so, I appreciate your input! ;) Take care out there and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, it is great following this book, I love the twists and turns.
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You are so welcome Yvette, it is great following this book, I love the twists and turns.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was full of tension and I had to keep reading. I didn't find out what Celeste was until I read the cast of characters. I would have given you six stars if I had one. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was full of tension and I had to keep reading. I didn't find out what Celeste was until I read the cast of characters. I would have given you six stars if I had one. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much, Shirley - be sure to 'catch up' so that when the next chapter comes out you'll be 'in the know' (wink, wink). So glad you enjoyed this one as I was hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond these two share... so, I appreciate your input! ;) Take care out there, my lady, and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
There truly is something wonderful about two menwho are besties. It's a wonderful situation that not a lot of men really experience -- on a deep, deep level. At least, not after high school or college, it seems.
I think you portrayed them and their relationship well and left us intrigued.
--Are we still on for Tuesday?
Thanks!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Yvette,
There truly is something wonderful about two menwho are besties. It's a wonderful situation that not a lot of men really experience -- on a deep, deep level. At least, not after high school or college, it seems.
I think you portrayed them and their relationship well and left us intrigued.
--Are we still on for Tuesday?
Thanks!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Isn't there though? I think the 'male bestie' thing has been lost somewhere as it's a bond that stands a lot more than women besties do, yeah? ;) :) I'm hoping this chapter solidifies (in the eyes of the reader) the true bond the two share... thanx, my lady, and I'll see ya Thursday! ;) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
