Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your appreciation of dolphins is clearly conveyed in this free verse. I enjoy them too and sometimes can see them from out condo. The watercolor you selected does them justice as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Robina, you're right dolphins are wonderful. We ofteen have them playing around our yacht when we are sailing. They're incredible creatures. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, :)

I have some suggestions:
If you don't believe me,
Google them. (Maybe using this word doesn't belong in a poem--just my opinion.)
I'm not a liar.
They converse amongst each other'
like people do or maybe better.
(Some of the poem sounds just like prose, not poetry. Maybe words like 'the' and 'and' or some wordy words.)
I don't know if I helped or not.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. I will check.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

you are so right in everything you say about these wonderful creatures. They are so smart and more human than many humans.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Robina,
I like your free verse poem of how these beautiful dolphins to me desire to make other jovial and so anxious to help others when they know one is in distress.

Gert

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written my grandchildren had the opportunity to sea dolphins when they were on holiday last year and they loved it I enjoyed good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from patcelaw

Exceptional

The dolphin is one very incredible mammal and have through the years been very helpful to mankind. I love to see them as well. Nicely written and presented. Patricia

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Man has learned
To abuse this species
Even tried to use them
In acts of war
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Everyone loves dolphins and I think one of the reasons is because they always have a smile on their face. We could learn a lot from that. A smile conveys a thousand words. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

You are absolutely right, Dolphins
are the most glorious creatures,
God certainly knew what He was doing
when He created them.
An excellent entry in this free verse poetry contest Ine. Good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good week.

reply by royowen on 17-Jul-2017

You too Ine