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Incident on a Train by HarryT
80 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt entry

Catch my train, find a seat, voices abound. Cell phone talkers in front of me, in back, all around me! My relaxing train ride home is no more. I open my latest paperback mystery. Piercing voices and constant jibber-jabbering interrupt my reading. So many voices pounding in my ears. A rising crescendo continues until I stand up, grab the phone of the woman next to me and smash it on the floor. I yell, "Let there be peace at last."
 


Writing Prompt
Write a story of 80 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 80 words.

     

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