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One sip of rum
Yes I missed a verse by Carlos' girl
The Drink Poetry writing prompt entry
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Rum, rum it's all around
don't mess me up
don't let me down

It's pirate mix
it does the tricks
it's light, it's dark
it's neat, it's short

Now pour me up
now pour me down
now mix me shake me
to the ground

Rhianna on the radio
I think I'll have another go
I'd find a room
I'd find a bed
but if you stay
with me instead

The rum will pour
let's hit the store
I think I need
a little more


Writing Prompt
Write a poem. You (or your character) take a sip of a drink and feel different. What happens?

     

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