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Clean Exit by Mia Twysted
75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

Mike stuffed the cash into the duffel bag.

"They're coming, Brad," Mike said to his partner-in-crime. "Get a move on it."

Brad rushed around in circles filling his getaway bag.

"I knew this was a bad idea from the start," Brad said. "I can't believe I let you talk me into this."

"Just shut up and pack."

"It's true. You cause me nothing but trouble."

"Quiet," Mike peered out the window, "it's time to run."

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