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The wonders of discovery on a evening walk
Evening Stroll by JLR
Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

The last golden rays showered the mountain top  
shadows casting long tendrils into the fading light
to the point where the waning rays had ceased      
though I squeezed my eyes for every last ray.      
 
Shadows casting long tendrils into the fading light
created a vision of movement as night was released
motion that magically made me want to dance away
 
 
To the point where the waning rays had ceased
suddenly, I was aware of a sweet floral bouquet        
and sitting there with an angelic flair, as if a prop,    
 
Though I squeezed my eyes for every last ray          
this maiden, so fair, smiled a bit, my jaw dropped   
as her hair shimmered in the moonlit forest canopy.

 

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Author Notes
Potlatch Poetry Trimeric--week of 5-22-2020
Trimeric tri-(meh)-rik n:
***a four stanza poem in which the first stanza has four lines
***the last three stanzas have three lines each, with the first line of each repeating
the respective line of the first stanza.
The sequence of lines, then, is abcd, b -, c -, d -.
***There is no line length, meter, or rhyme requirement or prohibition.
[ line length, meter, rhyme are OPTIONAL]

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