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: Missing Mom by Treischel
Mother's Day Poetry Contest contest entry

When mothers are gone
it's like a blackhole
in a personal universe.

BLACK

SUCKING

BARREN

Oh MOM!
You held us together.
An electrostatic family
Now split
like an atom.

Yet,
I hear you in the wind.
I feel you in my bones.
Your voice is in my mind


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Author Notes
Especially on Mother's Day is feel the devastation, yet the closeness. I promise to put flowers on your grave that day,

     

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