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A Canzonetta poem for Potlatch Poetry
Just Once More by damommy

 
Beside the little brook I stood
remembering a song once heard
in this untamed, enchanted wood
where nothing’s moved, no leaf has stirred.
I felt at home, my heart lay here,
I left it when that time before
I heard a melody so dear.
I wished to hear the tune once more.
 
So, soon it came, that lilting air.
the same sweet notes, the same refrain.
In blink of eye, he’s standing where
I thought I’d ne’er see him again.
Beside the little brook he stood
and leaned against the sycamore
in this untamed, enchanted wood.
I wished to hear the tune once more.
 

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Author Notes
The Canzonetta or Canzonet is:
- at least 2 octaves, made up of 2 quatrains of alternating rhyme.
- written with no fixed meter or line length.
- composed with a refrain, repeated in L8 of each octave.
- rhyme scheme - ababcdcD, efefgdgD.

     

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