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I walk with my Beloved to Lac Neuchatel
Angels Stop to Watch Us by Aaron Milavec
100 Word Story writing prompt entry


Walk with me to the lake, my dearly Beloved.  Yes?  Yes!

Orange lichens grace centuries-old stone walls lining our path . . . so good to hold your hand as we go . . . little stone houses with little gardens everywhere . . . hundreds of roses blooming . . . the path descends . . . wood smoke from a cottage chimney scents the air . . . you sing, "You make my heart free," in the tunnel crossing under the highway . . . the words and the echo thrill me . . . then we arrive and begin walking at the water's edge . . . angels stop to watch us and kiss each other when they see how happy we are . . . .


Writing Prompt
Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.

Author Notes
Here is another memoir.

     

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