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Haiku with a twist (get my gist?)
Shredded Dreams by Elizabeth Emerald
3 Line Poetry Contest contest entry

Clutching at tatters
beyond repair, I despair
Gone: all that matters

Recognized

Author Notes
I thought it would fun for a change! Enjoyed the challenge, too.

GONE replaces the original HOPE (which seemed to me trite and at odds with the
theme.)

CONTEST OVER

Thanks to AndreThreeThou for the artwork: Pagoda Waterfall.

     

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