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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
: Raindrops Crescendo by JLR
Artwork by eileen0204 at FanArtReview.com

I awoke to grey skies this morn,
lingering stiffness is my bane.
Aged, frail, my emotions forlorn
raindrops crescendo off the pane.

Winters seem to linger longer
with gentle rains tapping refrain
wanting sunlight brighter, stronger
raindrops crescendo off the pane.

The little wren with feathers wet
sits with rain cleansing his domain
flitting his wings to shake away
raindrops, crescendo off the pane.

The morning hours pass, still I plea
to let the sun's rays dance again.
Asking the wren to please, agree!
raindrops crescendo off the pane.

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Author Notes
Potlatch Club Contest
Related to love--something you love--anything such as rain, trees, people etc. Please keep it clean. Length AT LEAST 8 lines.

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Kyrielle *A Kyrielle is a French form of rhyming poetry written in quatrains (a stanza consisting of 4 lines, I used the following:
abaBcbcBdbdBefeB with B being the refrain.

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