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tanka contest
Apple Pie by Val Crisson
Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

Blossoms
bloom one spring day
ready
to soon be juicy apples
sliced into a baking pie

Author Notes
I chose to write this in the style of a Japanese tanka, which as the directions state 22 syllables are acceptable. It has the short/long/short/long/long syllable count of a tanka.

     

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