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Tetravalent
Thoughts About Love
: Givers and Takers by Bucketlist

Give and take make a pair in lust.
Not just work to start and then trust
No rush for one and then "I'm done"
There should be fair share to have fun


Trouble is we all say we know
But no way all 'self' helps love grow
And so give and take at same time
Help love and lust become sublime


'Slam bam' is not fun, if the giver does not start
Quick thrust, a stroke or two, won't ' fit the bill'


We must think of each side as well
To coach each pair, if love's to swell
No bell sounds to make your heart sing
If give and take isn't your thing





 

Author Notes
Inspired by DOLLY (A Tetravalent)

Syllable count
8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,8, 12,12, 8,8,8,8.

Meter: Iambic

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Artwork by Dolly

     

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