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A Chime Operandi (Dolly's Poems format)
I Built Around Myself A Wall by patcelaw


As I built around myself a wall  
I’d fall many a day  
then came the day I had to say  
that is when I did pray  
so that the Lord would take my strife  
comforting me  
helping me see  
I could be free  
and live with glee  
and be all I could be in life.


-Patricia Lawrence
11-26-19
 

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Author Notes
This is a biographical poem. I did indeed built a glass wall around myself figuratively. The walls came crashing down when I had a massive break from reality with my first bout with bi-polar disorder.

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