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When someone grabs your heart and never lets go
Of You I Feel This Way by JLR
Love Poem writing prompt entry

I am dazzled by the depth of your green eyes,
with an iridescent radiance sparkling like fireflies.
The lingering scent of your perfume does surprise,
I want to bottle and store the secret that herein lies.
The little lift of your lips curling upward as you, I cheer,
carries my world bounding, endlessly, as in winning a prize.
The way your purple gown flows and perfectly adheres,
balances you in perfection, like the best of fine wines.
That charming bounce as you dance around the sphere,
like a Geisha might, as to a poem, she would mime.
I pause to touch lightly, the softness of your reddish flowing hair,
with that gentle wispy lock that is a shock of white, just like mine.
How tenderly, gingerly I stroke the smoothness of your face, so bare,
to arrive at a height of adoration, that floats me to cloud nine.


Writing Prompt
Write a love poem without using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.

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Author Notes
Create a LOVE POEM No using Love, Kiss, Romance, Soul, Heart, Boy/girl Husband/wife or sexual terms

My thanks for the use of Dance me through the curtains by GaliaG

     

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