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Perfection Someday by fayesh
I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry
Artwork by VMarguarite at FanArtReview.com

If perfection is a virtue
I fall short
but not too far I hope

My tears of compassion overflow
My extended hand gifting often
My ears burn from the troubles of others
My lips withhold words that need to be said

Yet I am with flaws
My expectations of others to do as I do
to perceive the world as I view it
to taste life with the same palate as mine
I confess I expect too much
and have lost many
I must learn to teach, not preach
With humility I ask forgiveness of those 
driven away by my demands

I know I am not perfect
but maybe even flawed as I am,
I can one day,
when others will not matter,
 stand perfect before God.
 


Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.

Author Notes
Thank you to VMarguarite for the accompanying artwork.

     

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