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Follows with another Amazing Journey Entitled,
"Failure 9-11!"

"Traveling 2 Another Dimension"
Written on March 31st, 2003
By Doctor RIcky 1024 and Jason Richard Smrkovsky
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'Hey Jay?'
'Yeah, Bry?'
'Want to go for a ride?'
'My mom just got this Ford Mustang.'
'And, it was previously owned by professional driver.'
'Raced at Atco Raceway in Atco, New Jersey.'
...
'Wow Brian but I don't think so...
'You don't know how to shift it.'
'But, on second thought?'
'Hmmmm...
'Sure.'
...
"The year was 2001 and the movie, - "Fast and Furious."
"Had just come out and was released by Universal."
"It would affect the preteens during a time when life was moving much too slow."
...
"Time Reflects Pain...
"And, pain intensifies Time."
(Theology 48.09)
...
"So, the plan was to attend my sister Nikki's 27th birthday on March 31st."
"And, since she was at wrestling fanatic."
"My dad had ordered her a W.W.F. pay-per-view."
...
We stayed less than two hours."
"And, since it was at Nikki's Father Michael's house on Liberty Avenue, there would only be soft drinks."
(Michael was a recovered alcoholic)
...
"Brian was getting antsy because there were only older 25-27 year old men and only a couple of women...
"So, he wanted to leave."
...
Note: "Brian had owned that car only three weeks."
"And, since he was so reckless."
"He painted the curbing in a three, block, radius around my house black from the rubber of the tires!"
...
"Brian was Mentally-ill and depressed."
"So as a result, he was prescribed a drug for adults called, 'Effexor.'
"And, he did not want to live anymore."
"So, he was dared by a member of the Suicide Club at Southern Regional to total it!"
...
"Within less than a minute after Brian and Jason left."
"And, Brian did ask my youngest daughter Dana Alyse to ride in the backseat...
"But, Jason refused and told her to ride with her sister Kyle Erin."
(Nikki's sister)
"Which included her fiance Fred Drum and four year old daughter Sasha Lynn, whom would witness, as a result, the accident."
...
"After my mom and dad had arrived at the scene, the car we were driving in was totaled."
Brian gunned it."
"And, since it was locked in third gear?"
"A Ford representative stated it could have been going in excess of 100 MPH!"
...
"Brian was conscious but lying on a prown position with the wheel against his chest.'
"Complaining, while Jason was unconscious apparently in a deep Coma."
...
"A Fireman covered my son Jason and smashed the window in order to pull him out, while they used...
'The Jaws of Life.'
"To extract Brian and airlifted them both by helicopter to Atlantic City Trauma Center in Atlantic City, New Jersey.'
...
"And, because Jason was 'Raccooned.'
"And seriously Brain-Damaged, he was pronounced Seventeen hours later on April 1st 2003."
...
"There's much, much, much, more to mention."
"But thats for another time.'
"When together we will be....
"Traveling 2 Another Dimension."
Approximate Word Count: 513.


Author Notes
Special thanks goes out first, ad always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review, this Amazing Artist, 'jgracr.:
And, her Incredible Picture Entitled, "Dimension"

     

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