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Majestic tree
The old tree by Iza Deleanu
Take A Walk Poetry contest entry

You are a good old tree
That changed its smile for me
Today you give me gold
Which got my heart, sold
On your majestic view.
Along with your chipmunk crew.

I want to catch my breath
Because I feel impressed
On this terrific quest
Your leaves shine, through distressed
Shivering under  the coming blessed
Winds of winter that will give rest
To nature all at once...
 


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Thank you Ms. CrystieCookie999 for your suggestions:)

     

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