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In rhyming lines of 6 syllables...
Blessings, Day and Night by LisaMay
Rhyming Poem contest entry


Simmering summer sun,

sinking into the west;

it shimmered then glimmered

’til our fun day was done.

We’ll go home, feeling blessed.

 

Mellow moods of the moon,

rising in the night sky –

now beaming and gleaming.

I’ll always feel in tune

with you, my love, close by.

 

 


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Author Notes
Author's Note:
(Photo by David Straight on Unsplash.)

I made up this poetic form - I don't know if it already exists; others might know?
(I doubt it - it's something of a strange one!)

In my poem the stanza lines are all of 6 syllables, with the rhyme scheme as follows:

A (with alliteration)
B
C C (internal rhyme)
A
B

     

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