FanStory.com - 5-7-5 (imagination)by Mark D. R.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
this 'story' has 'toys': a play on words
5-7-5 (imagination) by Mark D. R.
Artwork by robertbradford at FanArtReview.com

imagination
this big rhino has iron*
word play perfected

Recognized

Author Notes
*The letters in 'iron' are found in the word 'rhino.'

With several reviews of my pseudo anagram 5-7-5 verse, the middle line might be rewritten as:

"this rhino has a big horn," or " rhino is 'horni' "

This rewrite may be stronger than my original ... LOL

Thanks to FanArtist for his imaginative animal.

     

© Copyright 2024. Mark D. R. All rights reserved.
Mark D. R. has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.




Be sure to go online at FanStory.com to comment on this.
© 2000-2024. FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement