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A 5-7-5 Loop poem
Clouds by kahpot

clouds shade the sunshine

~sunshine is the life of man~

man lives in the clouds

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Author Notes
Thank you David Ruhl for the artwork
I wish we could get our heads out of the clouds
and see what we are doing to our world.
I like trying new forms, hope this one works

     

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